Demon's origional story before we changed it

Chapter 1: Iam the demonofpersia i am a person who is a bounty hunter. i kill for a good amount of money and will be courageous to do anything but maybe i should rewind a bit. When i was only 5 years old an army attacked my family and killed them and captured me annd brought me to a facility where i was tortured above the highest level until i broke out and then i swore i would not rest until i killed the ones who killed my parents. i lived on the streets and soon joinde the shadowcythe adn became one of their best fighters and was a wanted man and my clan knew that after i killed king aelton but they almost kicked me out of the clan until they heard the cruel story that i need them to destroy them....... when they said them? i saidits a long story and left to train in yokai for a year then came back and killed chaos lord escherion then heard about the alliance and i thought then my clan could knim im evil thenbecause of the alliance so when they found out my name wasn't conner10125 i told them i was really the demonofpersia and as their mouthes dropped they started cheering in my confusion i asked and they said that they were glad because i killed escherion. Later that day i got a letter from lady Gravelyn and she said it was top secret it sadi i had to go and kill vath as well! as i packed my bags i thought this could be hard but i thought i'll do it fot Lore and then i heard a bloodcurdling scream and whent to shadowfall to see gravelyn laying there..... DEAD! so then i thought the undead army came to me and bowed and called me master. after Gravelyns funeral i put the undead army on high guard and i also called the doomknight army to protect and then i whent off to kill vath. when i go to vath i was exhausted and could hardly move i was so injured but i got up and whent to kill stalagbite as i speared him i felt a chaothic sensation as the vath cut me and one of stalagbite's crystals fell into my wound and my blood turned purple and then i remember nothing then i woke up with both of them dead eccept i was wearing vath's armor and weilding his sword then when i saw the purple scar the shape of a crystal i knew the crystal chorrupted me and i only had so long until the chaos fully chorrupted me and i became a chaos lord and i knew my power and i knew i could wipe outalmost all lore. i would be stronger than drakath but i knew i couldn't let choaos overcome me so i knew when the time came the clan would have to kill me. i overcame many precedures and medical treatments until it was no use i had 3 months left so i read and studied for a long time then i knew how i could live!
-to be continued-